Hello my name is Jordan I am eight years
Old. my favourite movie is could the next
Step my favourite singer is chris Brown
My favourite restaurant is in palmestin
North it is could genges you get to pik
Youer on food and after that you get
To. get to eat pan
Wednesday 23 May 2018
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Kia ora Jordan,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the world of blogging! I can't wait to see the great learning you share on your blog. Well done completing your first blog post.
Vicki
Hello you did a good job in how you introduced yourself :D
ReplyDeletehello my name is liam, i like that you said what you you favourite moive and restaurant is. a thing that i think you can work on is you spelling. a thing that you did good was introduceing your self good job.
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