Hi Jordan! My name is Grace and I am from Paroa school on the west coast! I really like you post it explains a lot about who you are and what you like! To be BTB (better than before) You could maybe add in who ypour frieds are nd stuff! Good job! From Grace
Hey Jordan, Carter from Paroa here, this gave me some good insight to who you are and gave me a good look at you, what made you choose all these things?
Maybe next time you could proportion it better so we can see the things you put easier.
Hello, Jordan. I'm Lucy from Paroa School, This looks really cool, and it gives lots of imformation about who you are, so that's cool! The words are sort-of hard to read though, so you could improve this by making the words bigger. Lucy
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Hi Jordan! My name is Grace and I am from Paroa school on the west coast! I really like you post it explains a lot about who you are and what you like! To be BTB (better than before) You could maybe add in who ypour frieds are nd stuff! Good job!
ReplyDeleteFrom Grace
I love that your favourite colour is red. That is my favourite colour too. and that's where I come from to
ReplyDeletei like it
ReplyDeletegood job jordan
ReplyDeleteHi Jordn. I also like burgers. At home I have a Golden Retriever.
ReplyDeleteI mean Jordan.
DeleteHey Jordan, Carter from Paroa here, this gave me some good insight to who you are and gave me a good look at you, what made you choose all these things?
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could proportion it better so we can see the things you put easier.
Carter.
Hello, Jordan. I'm Lucy from Paroa School,
ReplyDeleteThis looks really cool, and it gives lots of imformation about who you are, so that's cool! The words are sort-of hard to read though, so you could improve this by making the words bigger.
Lucy